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Frank Schwab: From the way that you wrote: "...in the NFL rulebook, the quarterback is deemed to be in a defenseless position "until he assumes a distinctly defensive position," and Brady wasn't —. Absolutely, you do NOT make it clear if you are stating that Brady wasn't in a DEFENSELESS position, OR if he wasn't in a "distinctly DEFENSIVE position. You've distinguished these 2 "positions" for a quarterback, but, you DO NOT make it clear, insofar as which "position" Brady was in. I hope you understand how you've left us readers a bit confused. Thank you very much.
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