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It is a pleasure to read informative reporting without drowning it gratuitous bias. I've been away from AOL for a while, and you can't imagine how pleased and surprised I was to see the professional approach AOL takes these days to describing news stories. I feel like I need a shower or bath after reading anything posted on Microsoft, or MSNBC, or CNN, etc. Those people think the problem is with "pronouns." No, with them the problem is with the "Adjectives"!
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